As most people have pointed out, excellent animation. Its very well animated indeed. But I don't agree on what most think about the story-line.
If you look at it deeper than just the visual you see that its a metaphoric depiction of steve's struggle to become something. The endless wait for something exceptional to happen, the breaking of his bicycle and the ending part in the forest all stand for something. If one is to translate this into words, then this story is about man, left with almost nothing at all. A broken bicycle and his home on the verge of falling apart. When going to work he goes to a fearsome forest. This is his way of percieving it. The beast would also then be his way of perceive his employer and in the end he sold a part of him self (the tooth) to overcome his anger and fear. He gained money and succes. And lived happy afterwards.
You might agree or not. But I think it's up to you to choose what to believe. Is this just a pure cosmetic expression of the author. Or is it his way to make a narrative? However it is, try to go bit deeper.
And for the author: Outstanding work! This is one of thoose animtions that takes "it" a step further. You are a great artist with a well evolved sense for narrative. Don't let any who don't comply with your way of telling take it away from you. Keep it up - would like to see more work from you!
Its easliy the best saw tribute on this site. keep up the good wokr, and nice ending, really brutal!
Nice movie. The graphics where ok, it looked like it had been traced sometimes. It was pretty funny to watch this movie, you really made the zombies look stupid, that was good. You have to make more details on some pictures, and practise on your fbf, especialy on the blood effects.
Anyway, good movie and i hopes you will make more of them.
its not much to say, learn flash. get a good storyline. thats all.
i dont now what to say, nice swedish! except of that, the movie was kinda silly. if i want to se a electrolux commercial, i will just turn on my tv... uttrycks full film!^^
Isnt silly a good thing?? couldnt you have commented the animation orsomething like that?
no, its not scary.
this movie was short, pointless and boring. And the screaming noise in the end was taken from half-life 2, it really didnt sound good. he was screaming "help me", but the rest of the movie was in japanese or something, strange?... ( did he actualy turn into pacman? it looked like he did.)
expressful in a bad way...
the story was , like the graphics, bad. The motions where slow and they where also bad. keep animating, you might get pretty ok at flash some day, good luck.( you really need it)
well, to start with...
...very good, but some of the movements where a little bad. And after seeing the first one, i thougt this movie would be quite long, but it was to short. but anyway, very good. And for the next movie you make, please, let it be longer.
good work man!
not so good.
Not bad, but bot good either. you have mutch to improve on .
if you are making a madness movie, make it something special.
The slaugthering are just like in krinkels movies, and we already
got his movies to watch if we want to see madness. It is just a waste of time making this movie, if you not really take time on making it. come up with some new characters and painting style,
maybe that could turn up to really good, becuase you got some skills with flash. my biggest advise, practise.
Good luck with your later animations.
i dont use to like stick-movies(castle is a exception) but this movie wasent to bad. acctualy it was really good. i really thinks it deserves to be on newgrounds. i dont think it is one of the many abominations, resting in the NG graveyard (or what it is called).
good work you two and keep up the animating^^
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